Close to heaven... A poem about love
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One of the first poem I wrote when I was younger
Dedicated to all the lovers out there
Advance Happy and In Love Valentine's Day.
Your funny ways
Your simple touch
Is merely close to heaven
The way you look at me
Your silly smile
The way you talk
Your loving acts
Your simple jokes
Your foolish deeds
These simple things you do
Even your not here
Close to heaven
Is what I feel inside
Tell me please
Am I just feeling right?
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I feel that you have written from the heart and believe you are gifted in conveying your feelings.
Thank you whonunuwho for your kind words. I was actually in love when I wrote that many many years ago.
Thank you Eman.Our society specially the media should change the way they present love nowadays.I think they are making it full of drama and hate. Your right love should be sweet and innocent, like it has always been. :)
This is a sweet portrayal of love. Nicely done. Welcome to HubPages!
The original Eman Level 3 Commenter 3 months ago
This is very nice poem so sweet and innocent. This the way i fell love should be felt and what we lack in society today. Nice work macquelinedc.