How could you? A poem
45An advice given to a friend
Many people all over the world
Are facing problems which are hard to be solve
Hope is nowhere tears is everywhere
And yet we should still believe
In the love that the Lord always give
But how could it be
That someone like you
Still can't see
The special hope and love
The Lord endlessly give
The heaven that we can reach is here
How could you only think about yourself
People around you also breathe
They face much problems than you do
But often you don't give attention
On what they are going through
If you can only realize
I think you will live
A special and happy life
Try to live a life full of kindness
So you will have sympathy for others
Please take the time
To reflect on this
Because your starting to be selfish and pessimistic
Just say to yourself
That is given to me
And for all the blessings
And the people who loves me.








Princess Prisca Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago
Lovely poem and wise advice shared with your friend. Good work, I really like it.
Ciao...Princess Prisca